I like the way you're using the pronoun "we" in the first paragraph - what's it like to play in a professional hockey team?
At least you can't say supporters are not identifying with their teams.
Being a professional hockey player is awesome (just talking is a bit difficult because of all the lost teeth). For more information please contact my buddy Tom at the Sabres. ;-) http://www2.sportsnet.ca/hockey/nhl/players/Thomas_Vanek/
More seriously: Well observed. I was well aware of that grammatical inaccuracy during writing and was considering to use the third person. But the point is - I'm living here for this year, Edmonton is my city and the Oilers are my city's team and I want our team to win, so emotionally it is "we". Therefore, I intentionally used "we".
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At least you can't say supporters are not identifying with their teams.
More seriously: Well observed. I was well aware of that grammatical inaccuracy during writing and was considering to use the third person. But the point is - I'm living here for this year, Edmonton is my city and the Oilers are my city's team and I want our team to win, so emotionally it is "we". Therefore, I intentionally used "we".